woah this is an intense manual - I like that you did that! The only thing I'd change about that is that I don't think we can use words. Try to tell the story in the pictures. Good concept, totally useless
i like the first picture. it looks serious, but it's actually ...stupid.
Ellie, i did the same mistake...unfortunately, we cannot use words D: i think your illustration is narrative, so you don't need any discriptions in it.
Oh three picture. You are hard worker. I would sugguest that try to draw all in one, maybe you can try three-views. I saw a lot of people did that in this assignment. Anyway, it is very uesless....
haha thats funny! Yeah I would try to compress it into one illustration.
So does the life jacket explode since it's made out of uranium? I'm wondering about the effects of this invention. I don't really know if uranium is light or heavy and sinks like a rock.
The super heavy metal idea is definitely a solid one (pun intended). A compression of the three would definitely get you around the letter usage. Maybe put the life jacket in the place of the letter for uranium on the periodic table, or someone sitting at the bottom of a lake or somethng, enjoying the jacket.
I love the concept! Definitely useless. Except I don't believe we can use words...So in that case I would just try to find ways that you can give step-by-steps without talking too much about it. Otherwise, I think it's a very funny idea and I like it a lot!
hahaha I love the invention. I kind of wish they were all on the same paper, though...so that there was a tone behind the steps as well
ReplyDeletewoah this is an intense manual - I like that you did that! The only thing I'd change about that is that I don't think we can use words. Try to tell the story in the pictures. Good concept, totally useless
ReplyDeletei like the first picture. it looks serious, but it's actually ...stupid.
ReplyDeleteEllie, i did the same mistake...unfortunately, we cannot use words D:
i think your illustration is narrative, so you don't need any discriptions in it.
anyway, nice concept!
Oh three picture. You are hard worker. I would sugguest that try to draw all in one, maybe you can try three-views. I saw a lot of people did that in this assignment. Anyway, it is very uesless....
ReplyDeleteThe use of words is helpful to understand the illustration, but I'm distracted by the part where it says "immediotly", is that the correct spelling?
ReplyDeleteThere you are
ReplyDeletehaha thats funny! Yeah I would try to compress it into one illustration.
So does the life jacket explode since it's made out of uranium? I'm wondering about the effects of this invention. I don't really know if uranium is light or heavy and sinks like a rock.
The super heavy metal idea is definitely a solid one (pun intended). A compression of the three would definitely get you around the letter usage. Maybe put the life jacket in the place of the letter for uranium on the periodic table, or someone sitting at the bottom of a lake or somethng, enjoying the jacket.
ReplyDeletei like it, i think that the words are effective, but only because they are separate than the illustrations themselves.
ReplyDeleteI love the concept! Definitely useless. Except I don't believe we can use words...So in that case I would just try to find ways that you can give step-by-steps without talking too much about it. Otherwise, I think it's a very funny idea and I like it a lot!
ReplyDeleteDON'T COMPRESS IT! This reads as infographic, not many people achieved that. Just cut the words, it's working great!
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